Here I have understood and enhanced the points made on the online focus group. I have changed the Poppy Scarlet image to a similar one as I felt I needed a more relaxed and less composed snapshot to portray and attract the reader the honesty of the article. I also increased the size of the venues image so the content is more clear. I also added a couple of changes such as the writing on the pick to enhance the similarity between this and the front cover one, and removing the distracting thick black box that encased the social network links to ensure that they were less 'in your face', I also added a pull quote to the Poppy Scarlet article to heighten the attraction to this article.
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