Here I have made the majority of the changes to. I started off by reducing the size of the page numbers as they seemed too big and distracting, so now they do the job while being isolated and not distracting away from the design. I changed my italic font so it was normal to assist the readers in being able to fluently read the article as this prevented a fluent reading pattern. I also changed "the music owns me" pull quote as I felt that it looked odd and stood out too much due to it having a different layout to the others so I changed it to another quote which was similar in layout. I finally spell checked the overall article to add to this professionalism and to assist the readers to understand what was being said.
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