Wednesday, 19 March 2014

Second Draft of Contents Page


Here is my altered contents page which now follows my new colour scheme. I changed the red to pink and changed the main image. I feel that the main image is slightly out of focus so I will probably change this to another one that's in focus but suggests a more relaxed tone which is to suggest that the article is honest. I kept the word 'win' in red to draw attention to this area and to persuade the reader to turn this page. This 'buzz' word will suggest positivity so when a viewer is looking at the contents considering to buy it they will see the only red writing which will draw their eye and possibly persuade them to purchase the magazine. I feel that I should bring 'tickets' and 'merch', I used merch as it has a more colloquial sound that will appeal to my demographic, in so the column is more defined and prominent therefore suggesting uniform and convention which Poppy Scarlet is breaking thus reinforcing her rebellious attitude. I will also need to bring in the image of the busker to also define the column here, I zoomed out of this image due to it being fairly pixelated. I will consider changing the tone of the captions to a grey as planned before as  the black looks extremely compact and makes it look incredibly busy which although represents the alternative genre also reduces the fluency of the page.

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